Ax Realm
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The Murder Weapon is Located on Her Midclavicular Line at the Fifth Intercostal Space
Categories: 3% Weird, Free Writing

Here is the crime scene.

She was gone.

He was there.

Part of him passed away.

He still breaths anyway.

He died metaphorically.

She is somewhere.

And she killed him metaphorically.

The murder weapon, her heart.

And no one searched for a dead body.

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56 Comments to “The Murder Weapon is Located on Her Midclavicular Line at the Fifth Intercostal Space”

  1. Mon says:

    Hmmm.. heartbroken, are you?

    hmmm.. ayos lang yan parekoy! marami pang nakasalawal jan. hehe

    kung di ko binasa yung entry, i would have guessed that the murder weapon is the bra. LOL

  2. Mon says:

    base ako!! yehey!! base!! haha

  3. Wolf says:

    It was like a line from a Precog from the movie “Minority Report”

  4. yhen says:

    gee, emo mode ito. may pinanghuhugutan ba? hehe

  5. katcarneo says:

    I kinda like it……..maybe because I have killed some metaphorically, or maybe because I have died the same way. Yay broken hearts club!

  6. dencios says:

    ax is longing for someone :)
    move forward ax.
    di ka mahal nun.
    haha

    • Ax says:

      Haha! May ganun. Sige, I’ll move forward, at hindi pwede lumingon?

      • dencios says:

        kung emo ka nga, di ka nga dapat na lumingon hanggat di ka pa naka move on talaga. haha

        seriously, maganda kasi at parang matindi ang pinaghugutan mo nitong post na to or sadyang malikhain ka lang talaga at mahusay sa mga ganitong tema.

        hindi namen yan alam kung anu meron sa post mo pero andito naman kame, mga blogfriends mo…

  7. Mon says:

    Magandang alas nwebe y media ng gabi sa blog mo dude. LOL :D

  8. bluguy says:

    hmmmm….hirap basahin ha! di ka broken-hearted..wala kang mapost…
    usapang puso…buhay at kamatayan?
    misteryoso ka ngayon?

  9. PM says:

    i’m not sure if i should even be commenting about this. er….

    • Ax says:

      i thought i pressed the send-reply button awhile back in the office.

      me, i’m not sure if i should even give this artic three days.

  10. azul says:

    aun…are you murdered?or you murdered someone?

  11. Allen says:

    wow brokenhearted! tamang tama. perfect mag-emo ngayon. umuulan. haha.

  12. àng puso màpànlinlàng yàn, wàg pàkinggàn;
    kundi pàpàtày yàn ng pàgàsà sà buhày

    there àre sooo màny fishes in the oceàn why die?

  13. walongbote says:

    awwww.. napaiksi ng tula mo tol, pero sobrang kinilabutan ako.. I mean, talagang ganun ang feeling ng maiwanan..kulang na lang, patayin ka ng buhay..

    HUGGZZ bro.. :( nagsenti tuloy aq..hehehe..

  14. Nortehanon says:

    Nice one, Ax. Mukhang mas generous ka magbigay ng letra sa title hehehe

    Happy Mother’s Day to your Mom.

  15. dong ho says:

    pwedeng ipublish to. hehehe..

  16. Banxietyy07 says:

    ibang klase hehe.

  17. brotherutoy says:

    wow. that’s one original way of saying she broke his heart. ang galing!

    bloghopping!

  18. hani says:

    wow.. nice one..

  19. Psyche Nurse says:

    The title should be;

    The Murder Weapon is Located on Her chest, on the midclavicular line at the fifth intercoastal space.

    • Ax says:

      Ow, ganun ba! Hm, yun pala yon. I researched where the heart is specifically. I don’t want to assume, so instead of med language, i just used the english one!

  20. Melvin says:

    ui okay to…

    pero the line..
    “The murder weapon, her heart”

    parang mali…
    i think it should have been “her words” or “her silence”

    because kung makikipagbreak man ang girl, why would she use her heart??

  21. fernan says:

    My murder weapon is the tongue attacking the T4 dermatome area…

  22. grabe, ang lalim ng gabi, at ang lalim din nito in the sense na ang lalim ng meaning although you used simple words..

    grabe, iba ka talaga..ngayon ko nga lang pala nacheck webs and spider comet page mo..thanx, andun na pala kami..hehe..wala lang..

    ang lalim mong tao..di ko kinaya ung energy mo..pero i have a friend na parang katulad mo mag-isip..buti na nga lang hindi xa nagpsychology xe wala lang..baka maging ibang level na ung nalalaman nya about human brain

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